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The Darkness contest entry color finished2 by oldmarksir The Darkness contest entry color finished2 by oldmarksir
fix the mistake ...

"There is some nice stuff going on here but Iím not a fan of triangle shaped panels as they always feel like everything is being forced/crammed into that space. The reader is following a story and shouldnít be distracted by the shape of a panel. I like the spatial separation between Jackie and the Brotherhood goons in panel #1 as it sets up the rest of the action nicely. The Darkling in panel #2 is a bit too dark (pun intended) and its hard to see what heís doing. The artist takes a risk in the last panel with the angle but for the most part it works. The only issues I have with it are Jackieís leg being out of proportion to the angle of the shot and the ďin perspectiveĒ Aaiieee. Because the SFX is in perspective and dead center itís the first thing you see in the panel. Thatís a no-no but easily fixed. I like this page a lot." -Mark Silvestri

It's my honour and luck to have comment by Marc Silvestri.Thanks alot!

Congratulations to all winners and semi-finalists.,
In fact there are so many great entries ,
I'm lucky and glad to win the 3rd prize.
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:iconmeganann23:
meganann23 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012
This is kickass!

The Darkness are better than Team Fortress 2.
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
thanks!
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:iconmeganann23:
meganann23 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
You're welcome.
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:iconauroraart:
AuroraArt Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Congrats, marksir! :D
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
thanks!
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:iconauroraart:
AuroraArt Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome :)
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:iconangelitaramos:
AngelitaRamos Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
I really loved yours a lot. I just love the first panel and your colors. It really stood out also I think too because of the white boards.
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
thanks!
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:icontexapache:
Texapache Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Congrats! I thought this one would win it all!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
thanks!
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:iconricardoredway:
ricardoredway Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
this is my fave of the top three
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
thanks!
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:iconkafelek:
Kafelek Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Anyway, like I said, 1st for me.
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
thanks!
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:iconhassoomi:
Hassoomi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Congrats!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
thanks!
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:iconestheryu:
Estheryu Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Congratulations!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
thanks!
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:iconsnoozzzzzz:
snoozzzzzz Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
Congratulations! You were already a winner in my head before your actual win! :D
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
thanks!it's my luck~
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:iconsnoozzzzzz:
snoozzzzzz Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
:D you're welcome!
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:icondianavard:
dianavard Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
Congrats!!! Great work!!!!!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
thanks!
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:iconramstudios1:
ramstudios1 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nice work. Congrats!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
thanks!
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:iconelcubanote:
ElCubanote Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Artist
Congratulations for the Win :3
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
thanks!
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:icondairykwing:
dairykwing Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
This is awesome... my only suggestion would be to change the font to something slightly more legible. Good luck!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
thanks!I accepted the suggestion,hope you guys like it~
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:iconelcubanote:
ElCubanote Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Artist
Congrats!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
thanks!
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:iconnightthief777:
NightThief777 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is nice!,.....very very nice! Blood scene is awesome.
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
thanks!
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:iconnightthief777:
NightThief777 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
yw
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:iconharveyfenellere:
harveyfenellere Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
a pro works!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
thanks!
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:iconhassoomi:
Hassoomi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
One of the best I've seen so far!

but..:
I think you should use a better font for the text in the bubbles...
And I think you should work on the monster (The one breaking the cable thingy ) a little more...

Good luck!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
thanks!
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:iconglho:
Glho Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
This is sick dude! Working on mine too. MOTIVATION
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
thanks!
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:iconalf-alpha:
Alf-Alpha Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow! Awesomest entry yet!!!!!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
thanks!
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:iconyannickbouchard:
YannickBouchard Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011   General Artist
Damn you! that looks awesome! I mean... good luck man! xD
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
yours looks awesome too!good luck~
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:iconthe-pencilist:
the-pencilist Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing man! I'm working on mine as we speak..but this is insane...one of the best I've seen so far...The competition is tight...keep it up!
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
keep it up man!
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:iconfattass:
fattass Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
you sealed the deal there bro, congrats in advance! I can't stop looking at your work :)
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:iconoldmarksir:
oldmarksir Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
thanks!you had good works too~
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