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The Darkness contest entry color finished2 by oldmarksir The Darkness contest entry color finished2 by oldmarksir
fix the mistake ...

"There is some nice stuff going on here but Iím not a fan of triangle shaped panels as they always feel like everything is being forced/crammed into that space. The reader is following a story and shouldnít be distracted by the shape of a panel. I like the spatial separation between Jackie and the Brotherhood goons in panel #1 as it sets up the rest of the action nicely. The Darkling in panel #2 is a bit too dark (pun intended) and its hard to see what heís doing. The artist takes a risk in the last panel with the angle but for the most part it works. The only issues I have with it are Jackieís leg being out of proportion to the angle of the shot and the ďin perspectiveĒ Aaiieee. Because the SFX is in perspective and dead center itís the first thing you see in the panel. Thatís a no-no but easily fixed. I like this page a lot." -Mark Silvestri

It's my honour and luck to have comment by Marc Silvestri.Thanks alot!

Congratulations to all winners and semi-finalists.,
In fact there are so many great entries ,
I'm lucky and glad to win the 3rd prize.
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:iconmeganann23:
This is kickass!

The Darkness are better than Team Fortress 2.
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AuroraArt Jan 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Congrats, marksir! :D
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AuroraArt Jan 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome :)
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AngelitaRamos Jan 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
I really loved yours a lot. I just love the first panel and your colors. It really stood out also I think too because of the white boards.
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:icontexapache:
Congrats! I thought this one would win it all!
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